I do not know what to say anymore my friend, it is all good and well done.
I understand you are putting lots of material there,so maybe that is why you are going a bit fast or maybe that is your style, slow down a bit, it is really the only thing i can suggest the rest is great.
First off, you did a great jod with cards. I can hear the people now I wouldn't want to play cards with you. I'm not always sure thats a good thing. On the other hand if thats what you want is credit you got it. I also thought the pacing was a bit quick, Your doing some pretty impossible stuff there. I think by letting those display's sink in bit longer, you could get a stronger level of conviction. Nice card work for video, Jmac
