I think you made a great job with this performance. The pose of both of you when introducing the sword through the neck is beautiful and dramatic. You've squeezed this effect to make it much more than it use to be. Congratulations and keep going!!!
Perfect example of how to turn a 10 second illusion into a well rounded performance. Absolutely GREAT choreography. A flawless performance. Nicely done! I really enjoyed this one.
